Team 2: Restoration Commercial
URL: http://restoration-commercial.portspaces.com
Overall Impressions
The immediate first impression is that not only are the categories much better, there is also a lot more solid information here. Add to that that authors sign their names, and this blog is already looking up.
Overall this blog is just about as good as any professional blog that’s been written for quite some time. Grammar’s good, sentence structure is good, there are lots of links, great titles. I really don’t have anything to nitpick at. In terms of scores, it’s 4/5’s all around. Really, well done to this team!

May 30th, 2005 at 8:18 pm
High Octane Blogging — Jeremy Wright weighs in
Jeremy Wright is providing some excellent feedback to The High Octane Blogging Bootcamp leading me to feel the coaching model we are testing here will work. Next up is Susie Gardner of Buzz Marketing with Blogs fame.
June 1st, 2005 at 6:23 pm
Jeremy,
Thanks for taking the time to review our blog and provide your feedback. Much appreciated.
Regards, Team 2.