From the (just edited) Chapter 1 of my book:
every reader is there by choice, every reader is choosing to interact with your business and every reader is a set of eyeballs that wants to hear more from you.
Yep. Eyeballs that want to hear from you. Thank God for my reviewers and editors. I can be such a dumbass sometimes 
April 19th, 2005 at 9:54 am
A semi-colon or two would help as well.
April 19th, 2005 at 12:26 pm
Hey, that scans way better than “every reader is a set of ears that wants to see more from you.”
If you’re anything like me, Jeremy, you use more words than you need the first couple of drafts. I find most of what I do in editing is simplifying and reducing, then going back and inserting all the transition statements that I thought were so obvious they weren’t needed.
April 19th, 2005 at 2:39 pm
You should start releasing sentences one by one daily just to keep people on the edge of their chairs.
April 19th, 2005 at 2:42 pm
Heh, that’d be kind of fun actually. There are a few really good “out of context” ones that I’ve written.