Some Sentences Are Art


I’m preparing some courseware for Microsoft. Here is a sentence from one of the “instructions on how to prepare this document” types of notes. It’s art:

The goal of this description is to provide a clear description of the instructional purpose of the activity and how the activity will be facilitated by the instructor or completed by the student.

Wow.

  1. #1 by Nathan - April 9th, 2005 at 08:55

    Haha. That was great.

  2. #2 by Shawn Lea - April 9th, 2005 at 09:36

    Sounds like Microsoft technical writers get paid by the word! And I sincerely hope the courseware itself is much more user-friendly.

  3. #3 by Matt Thornton - April 11th, 2005 at 08:48

    Makes sense to me. You want to try reading some of the docs on the stuff I use, they’ll fry your brain right out…

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